Challenge: Write a horror story in stream of consciousness.
I decided to tack on 55er as an additional challenge element because I was too tired to write more than that am a masochist.
The beast is already here and the server room is doomed, there’s so much water and the beast is spraying it all over the machinery, sparks are flying everywhere. The havoc should electrocute the beast wading through the two centimeters of water all over the floor but it’s unaffected unlike me, who is standing on-
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N. WS. Jokela, more commonly known as WindySilver, is a Finnish programmer and a hobbyist artist fighting a war against procrastination on the losing side. When her free time is not taken up by things like reading, procrastination, video games, watching series or more procrastination, she mainly writes sci-fi fanfiction and original flash fiction of various genres. While she dabbles in a lot of things ranging from digital art to jewelry to plants to whatever catches her interest, writing is her persistent forte.
You should not give her yet another crazy flash fiction challenge to take part in because she simply cannot say "no" to it.
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Wow! You really used the stream of consciousness element to your advantage with this one. The cut-off at the end and the implications are so good, I’m floored. Writing 55ers are hard, but it’s also incredibly hard to write a 55er that doesn’t feel like one with how every word is used, and you managed to do both beautifully. I love Horror that ends with a line that punches you right in the gut. And while tired, too? Wow! Good job! :>
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Thank you so much! \(^_^)/
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Oh snap. That ending.
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Thanks for reading! :D
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I love the abrupt ending! *claps* Really shows where this person’s mind was as they witnessed the horror before them. And one can easily guess what happened to them in the end. Nice job!
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Thank you! :D
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